You say “Olesm has recently been involved with Ceria Springfield.” It’s Springwalker* You know, the thing Pisces always calls her! Maybe this was a computer autofill or something?

chole -> chloe

“Cognita is seem as indispensable” – should be “seen”.

Foliana’s entry has the word “genenerally”.

The entry for Griffins says, “Griffons hunt in packs” but it probably ought to be “Griffins”.

Lism says “He was one of the first Drake” but Drakes should be plural.

“Nagas are imposing half-serpent half-humanoids being” probably should be “half-humanoid beings”.

“Ocre has seem a small boom” should be “seen”.

Of Relc it is said “there’s no one you’ll want backing you up” but it is missing an “else”.

The Seven has an extra space: “fell into his slumber .”

String people has the entry “A people make of cloth and string” but it should be “made”.

No mention of Reiss, and I so enjoyed that interaction.

Love the story, and thank you for the glossary! It is a nice refresher on a lot of the characters/places that we’ve met/seen.

Vincent is from Rhir, not Baleros iirc