Comments on: Solstice (Pt. 8)

By: neet promoter

neet promoter — Fri, 25 Apr 2025 17:45:30 +0000

so we got all manners of wondrous adventures on their own being flipantly ommited, thats very nasty.
and the last encounter putting magic overly top over techonology, ah, i suppose.
then againm aron is making magitech…with the aid of some oldgod. Bring some more engineering weebs and we going to get something.
i see ryoka is not a fan of sci fiction.

By: Chemuni

Chemuni — Tue, 29 Oct 2024 01:40:05 +0000

In reply to pirateaba.

Nama’s eyes fixed Ryoka and she adjusted the spectacles.

Should be Fixed on Ryoka

By: Alacris

Alacris — Mon, 19 Aug 2024 10:50:59 +0000

In reply to Ryuuku. Maybe being in a world where there are no rules breaks there sense of logic.

By: Aeri

Aeri — Mon, 29 Jul 2024 12:57:07 +0000

In reply to tomatoe.

Not exacrly a typo. Should probably be written as “ten thousand ten thousands,” though.

This is a way of “counting” larger numbers in some number systems. Essentially this is (10,000 X 10,000), so 100,000,000 (one hundred million).

By: Ryuuku

Ryuuku — Fri, 18 Aug 2023 18:02:43 +0000

Ryouka! You should have grabbed the space marines’ guns and other discarded gadgets!

Also, I know it’s the theme, but getting a little tired of immortals’ thinking they’re so much BETTER than someone who is mortal.

Just disappointing when there is no rationality that comes with age. It’s like, what have you been DOING all your thousands of years if all you can do is “sound wise.” Ugh. Ryouka, let ’em know what’s up. You’re our rational Human representative in this story… at least one of them. Pisces, I’m looking at you too.

By: infiniplex2

infiniplex2 — Tue, 05 Oct 2021 21:56:01 +0000

In reply to pirateaba.

“sixty two” -> “sixty-two”

“He was of one court, not half of the whole.”

Based on what was said about Melidore before, should this be “He was of both courts,”?

By: cgmcnama

cgmcnama — Mon, 08 Feb 2021 11:34:25 +0000

>“My name is _______! Say it!”

It should be Tamaroth, the leader of men. But the underscores are 7 characters instead of 8.

By: Harry Tjondro

Harry Tjondro — Fri, 22 Jan 2021 13:37:00 +0000

A great build up!! I read dozens of novel and I could say that this is one of the best build up.

i am REALLY curious about what Nama is. or was or be.

By: tomatoe

tomatoe — Wed, 06 Jan 2021 08:00:17 +0000

Is this a type? or missing a dash? I don’t usually comment on stuff like this but no one’s mentioned it yet. Sorry if it’s not a typo!

“We have marched ten thousand ten thousand times for your ends of the world.”

ten thousand is written twice

By: dradford

dradford — Mon, 04 Jan 2021 00:45:26 +0000

In reply to pirateaba. "What are you, wearing, spacesuits?” stray comma