Comments on: 7.58

By: Mike E.

Mike E. — Fri, 16 Jan 2026 17:56:59 +0000

This is years late (way behind it seems :) ), but my kids also followed Unus Anus, daughter has their flag hanging from her ceiling.

By: WoodGnome

WoodGnome — Mon, 17 Nov 2025 14:07:47 +0000

In reply to Onyavar. Pariss, the Drake leader that followed Ryoka through the Enchanted Maze outside of the Necromancer's Castle.

By: WoodGnome

WoodGnome — Mon, 17 Nov 2025 14:03:23 +0000

In reply to Altra. If it is not magic, does it come from Pawn's Divinity. Pawn is Truly a Holy Person. It is a wonderfully defensive skill for the Antinium.

By: Rose

Rose — Mon, 01 Sep 2025 16:33:18 +0000

Loved this last chapter. The description of the battle had tears in my eyes. Keep up the good work.

By: Bookwyrm

Bookwyrm — Mon, 30 Jun 2025 18:45:17 +0000

In reply to pirateaba. "She raised a hand and ran." Technically, since Ryoka just got on the bike, it should be 'rode'.

By: Bookwyrm

Bookwyrm — Mon, 30 Jun 2025 18:37:47 +0000

In reply to pirateaba. "We have a Runner who can call the wind and a [Lady] who makes flames, and a naked Drake." -> "We have a Runner who can call the wind, a [Lady] who makes flames, and a naked Drake."

By: neet promoter

neet promoter — Tue, 22 Apr 2025 19:52:35 +0000

a hearthfell, ah, cant help but feel a bit dissapointed, the charachters have been painted to be as flawed as possible, and suddenly trying to paint ryokas a bleeding hearth is a bit hillarious, her first rite of passage was an angsty runner going towards death calling everyone cowards, then met a dragon and a fae and suddenly she is a saint. i think not. Going for a propper route would be making her a broken person the likes of named adventurers, and that would have been be interesting to kingdom come.

well finishing up the chappy and i have to say that it feels like a comedy, compared to the siegue of liscor, and the witchsteria with belivavas, i mean more so compared to that, feels like all the armies instantly pop up, and you have to laugh that the city belonging to magnolia changed hands quite so. Serves her right. well, nothing to it, i suppose we lacking another 2 or 3 before this ends?

By: Lotus

Lotus — Tue, 28 Jan 2025 07:32:56 +0000

Erin.

By: Electrflame

Electrflame — Fri, 17 Jan 2025 23:35:10 +0000

Wow I wanted to hold off on commenting until I caught up with current chapters but this was so much of a ride have to finally leave a comment. This story quickly became a favorite but became my absolute favorite somewhere around the beginning of volume 7 and this is most definitely my favorite volume so far of this story. Besides the teriarch introspective moments from like 20 chapters ago. This is one of the more emotional moments for me with the confiding at the beginning and the ladies calling in all their favors and goodwill. Master class pulling the run off without it seeming Like an asspull that they succeeded over the assassin’s guild

By: Chemuni

Chemuni — Thu, 24 Oct 2024 02:51:04 +0000

In reply to pirateaba. I'm confused on what this part meant.

It was true that Ryoka Griffin’s two friends from Reizmelt she could argue into it.

I'm pretty sure it's a typo because it feels like it nonsensically jumps ship from one line of thought to another.