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well, salis bombastic entrance missed mentioning if he was nude across the guild, not to mention that pff, he opens the door, and suddenly he is on the guild, is it a step away from the players inn?, or maybe, 3 spashes of assasin worth of steps. a bit weird that they had not eyes on salis till then, very sloppy.

This first typo feels grammatical since two separate people’s skills aren’t reliant on only one person’s energy supply.

However, both relied on her stores of energy from food. -> However, both relied on energy storages made from food.

A second typo:

I came because…I apologize too. -> I came because…I wanted to apologize too.

“how much a big shot” should be “how much of a big shot”

Presumably, this would cause a large number of nobles and merchants and citizens and anyone that couldn’t get mail delivered by Runners to stand against the Assassin’s Guild.

Main problem with this idea is that it wouldn’t do much. The Five Families can undoubtedly deal with the Guild if they wanted to – but no one wants to be the first to start dealing with them, since whoever is first is going to receive the brunt of the retaliation. It’s the same mob psychology behavior that allows only a few people with guns to rob an entire bank with dozens of people in it.

That assassin specifically stated he was from Invrisil. There are drakes living in the north, even if only a few. Fighting between the north and south would also likely push such minorities into the criminal elements of society, so having drakes in the northern Assassin’s Guild would make sense. Sending drake assassins on a job to somewhere that is predominantly a drake population would also make sense.

She did not ask him that. She started to ask him something, which was presumed to be if he was a dragon, but stopped.