“Ksmvr’s gestured took in the small crowd standing with them.”

Something is wrong here—I thought maybe you meant “Ksmvr’s gestures”, but still the sense of the sentence escapes me. Maybe just “Ksmvr took in the small crowd…”?

“He turned away. Erin tackled him from behind. She hugged him as the [Scout] froze. She only let go once she was done. He was blushing as she turned.”

I think the last sentence should be “He was blushing as he turned”—it’s Halrac who turned away from Erin, who hugged him from behind—or do I understand it wrong?

“But for now, we must away.”

Is it colloquialism? The sentence seems in need of a verb (“go away”?)

[Martial Artist] now where have we heard that before?

“Selys scratched at her neck. Her tail curled up before she caught herself. Maviss rolled her eyes and her tailed waved back and forth a tad irritably.”

Tail.

You are right on all accounts.

I feel that without Rags the captured goblins are just not “wise” enough to form long term relationship. To put it another way, Rags is the chieftain for a reason.

There is certainly material for good stories. Something along the lines of blind Laken having more developed sense of smell being attracted by Peblesnach’s cooking. Or Laken hiring Ulvama because he is very short of mages.

However, overall I see the end result being that captured goblins go back to Rags/Liscor/Wandering Inn using the door. The real story is not where they end up, but how they end up there. I am most definitely looking forward to finding out how they get back to Rags/Wandering Inn.