Pretty sure it’s not a typo, it’s Flos cutting his own speech off, cause he chose the wrong word.

Into the Kingdom of Nerrhavia’s Fall that we now know today.

Fall -> Fallen

The Serpent Hunts walked down the hall, juggling their weapons
‘Hunts’ should be ‘Hunters’

“thirty one” should be “thirty-one”

“To be granted powers simply be inducting new members.”

This sentence is wrong somehow. Possibly “by inducting”?

Should be strength not streng

Pirateaba, your maps are as awesome as your worldbuilding! (I loved the very detailed descriptions of all these nations in the follow-up chapter!! They are all so different from each other!)

I also came up with a map of Chandrar before, because I wanted to visualize the political landscape somehow.
And guess what, your map is more or less a confirmation of what I imagined.

Although I wonder: Squiggly borders like in your map are usually only in such a shape because they follow some rivers. In the deep deserts, there are usually no borders (in modern times: straight borders); and in a fragile political landscape like faux-medieval Chandrar, the notion of fixed borders is flawed anyway, it would be more like “spheres of influence”.

I had had exams so I’m behind but I am confused by one thing. All of the kingdoms are old ones. Not a single one of them is a rebellious servant of Flos and other than the Emperor of Sands they all seem quite old. When Alexander the Great died many of the satraps were Persian and the old city states remained. Yet, it was partitioned between his generals as they had the strongest force which this chapter has made clear Flos took care to ensure Reims’s army was stronger than it’s vassals.It took decades for the city states to reassert themselves and centuries for the Persians.The Ptolemies, Antigonids and Seleucids all descended from Alexander’s generals and all survived centuries until Rome annexed them. Similarly even Napoleon, who unlike Flos or Alexander was defeated had several of his new creations survive. Joachim Murat’s Kingdom of Naples for instance, which only fell because he joined Napoleon during the Hundred Days and could easily have survived as it initially did. Furthermore it is clear that Flow had no compunction confiscating Realms from their Royal families which makes their immediate resurgence surprising. In summary I am surprised by how easily Chandrar seems to have returned to the norm.