Comments on: 2.47

By: Heaven

Heaven — Fri, 02 Jan 2026 05:48:36 +0000

Ahhh the end of this chapter was so satisfying!! Yess Erin. And yay Ryoka for learning self control. Love that once Erin started the fight it was totally okay for others to join in. Erin is a good temperature check for whether or not violence is warranted since Erin hates fighting

By: Heaven

Heaven — Thu, 01 Jan 2026 08:14:39 +0000

Wait a minute, it says here that Ryoka took off her shoes but didn’t she leave them along with her coat in the snow while she was running to get to Teriarch? I doubt the mend spell that he did on her injured feet would have given her new shoes!

By: Lotus

Lotus — Wed, 15 Jan 2025 05:42:54 +0000

Women!!!!

By: AbraCadaver

AbraCadaver — Wed, 16 Oct 2024 06:08:53 +0000

I love current Ryoka. I expected her character development was gonna be worth the wait, but I’m still relieved to be right :)

By: Ray

Ray — Wed, 27 Dec 2023 15:43:43 +0000

In reply to pirateaba.

“Damn it, Erin. It is going to be this hot coming out as it felt going in?”

The ordering of "It is" should be reversed to "Is it"

By: marine

marine — Sat, 18 Nov 2023 17:36:44 +0000

In reply to xland44. Ceria and Olesm were a couple for a few chapters

By: Ryuuku

Ryuuku — Thu, 06 Apr 2023 14:25:13 +0000

This’ll be great. You know, I was really scared when I woke up, but now I’m thinking this could be more like a holiday.” Hmm. More Britishisms from Erin, who’s supposed to be from the ‘States. Instead of “holiday” consider “vacation.” Otherwise great chapter!

By: Dusty Tsalkova

Dusty Tsalkova — Mon, 01 Jul 2019 23:48:35 +0000

Ryoka’s smile could have cured depression. What a great line. I had a huge smile by the end of the chapter.

By: Onyavar

Onyavar — Thu, 16 May 2019 02:48:47 +0000

In reply to BartHumphries. When I read this chapter right now for the first time, my first thought was how Erin would level up quickly when she starts franchising. Curious how this works out. But as it seems, Erin usually turns all her lemons into great juice, so there might be benefits even if she doesn't franchise.

By: cdlevit

cdlevit — Sun, 10 Feb 2019 15:48:22 +0000

Hm, why aren’t there no rowdy female/women fighting? Both in Liscor’s inn, here in other places the males/man were the ones to have bar fights, get rowdy and so on. Up to this chapter, I’ve didn’t pay attention to that aspect, but, the scene got repetitive – in it’s used characters.

Also, why, most time the female characters are those who are fighting against female characters – I’m talking about lastibg antagonistic relationships, not about the episodic ones?

Maybe I’m wrong, but that’s the feeling that I keep having.

Thanks for writing!